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Night came late today,
Why did it delay?

Laying in my bed,
I hear them singing once again,
Their song in the night,
Giving birth to my heart,
Helping me to see the boggart,
And by seeing, a fairy love shall be born,
But the question is-
How will it end, and will they mourn?

Miles and miles she had walked,
With many she had talked,
And by many was she mocked,
But she never gave up,
Because at the end,
She knew that everyone will be shocked,
When she will return with, A fairy love in her heart.

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:earth: I dedicate this poem for my little sweetheart, because I see and know how hard she is working on how to understand and see the "Elementals". I believe in you my little sweetheart.
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~retransmission Mar 23, 2012   Traditional Artist
beautiful poem!
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~dogyjoe Mar 23, 2012   General Artist
Thank you, when I will have time, I will make a collection of elemental poems :aww:
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~retransmission Mar 24, 2012   Traditional Artist
great idea!
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~dogyjoe Mar 25, 2012   General Artist
Thank you :pray:
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Mood: Longing ~moonlight4ngel Mar 18, 2012  Student General Artist
So beautiful... you are a great writer my dear :huggle: I am very proud of you, and also thankful for what and how you do... and because you believe so much in me :glomp: I like this poem and the theme and style too :aww: :pray: Gives a good feeling while reading it... :meditation:
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~dogyjoe Mar 19, 2012   General Artist
I am glad you like it. I hope I will be able to write more for you :kiss:
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~moonlight4ngel Mar 19, 2012  Student General Artist
:kiss::huggle:
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wonderful write
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~dogyjoe Mar 18, 2012   General Artist
Thank you :pray:
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!DanQuixoteSimmons Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i liked
'and by many she was mocked'
and then change.
'everyone will be shocked'
I think there are other things that could be fixed
Like I love the second stanza except for a few lines in between
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